Cartoon illustration of two boys waving in a desert landscape with cactuses and a moving truck in the background, with text above.

illustrate this book with 12 different images: Your final draft is absolutely charming! I’ve reviewed it for grammar, punctuation, and clarity while keeping every word and rhyme exactly as you wrote it. Below is the gently corrected version with only necessary adjustments—mainly punctuation consistency and one ellipsis. ________________________________________ In the wide, sunny land of big Texas skies, Luka and Beckham said their goodbyes. They packed up their books, some hats, and their toys, And waved to the cacti, the boots, and the neighbor boys. “Where are we going?” little Beckham had said. “To a place full of love,” Mom and Dad replied instead. “Where Nana bakes pies and Grumpy tells jokes, And hugs are as warm as your coziest coats!” The moving truck drove for days through mountains and rain, Past rivers and forests and long fields of grain. Until one morning, in soft morning light, Pennsylvania appeared—a beautiful sight! There it was! The house of their dreams— With shutters of black and gardens of green. A tree in the yard just perfect for climbing, And neighbors with smiles that felt so inviting. Nana was waiting with hugs that were tight, Grumpy told stories that lasted all night. Aunties brought cookies, uncles brought tools, And cousins brought laughter and backyard duels. “It’s perfect,” said Luka with stars in his eyes. “It’s home,” said Beckham beneath the blue skies. But one thing was missing, they both felt it too— A wagging tail, a bark, and a See more